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03-05-2008
Eric Gasparich
Ah, I like this, for several reasons. Most important is this. This is the essence of Christianity: the ecclesia, or "the called out ones," those called from among the nations, a royal priesthood, a singular (peculiar) people. It intrigues me how incompletely so many Christians grasp this. Every one is called to recapitulate the spiritual journey of Abraham. Christ calls us to leave our tribe which ultimately will disappear, and join, in the spirit, an eternal people looking for an eternal city whose maker and builder is God.
Good poem, in content. The rhyming scheme, yes, could use a little work. That will come with time and further meditation.
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03-15-2007
Jackie Edwards
I like it. ^^ Good job.
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