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Angel of May
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 05-09-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Pure violet blooms
Like a shy smile on warmed rocks.
Sunshine of young Spring.

Blessed by God's soft whispering,
Live the life, Ninni Marie!




Author's note:
I wrote this poem to Ninni Marie. Today is her birthday!


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05-18-2006 James Shammas    

I like, too, that same, very evocative second line: "shy smile on warmed rocks" is gushing with beauty and gentle, innocent poise. The more I read it, the more subtle flavors it evokes. I picture in my mind a sweet, young girl or boy coming of age into the great wide world, needing perhaps a gentle push, as she just starts to open up. It's a really great image that you've created, and it avoids any trace of sentimentality or "schtick." I love, too, the internal rhyme of "spring" and "whispering." This is a gem that either came to you in an inspired flash or one you worked on slowly and carefully, despite its brevity.

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05-10-2006 David Pekrul    

I love the line, "Like a shy smile on warmed rocks."
Happy Birthday, Ninna Marie. You must be a very special lady.
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