Help Us Stop Plagiarism -
Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize.
To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste.
click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before
you recommend or rate the work highly...
That is the kind of prayer that God honours and answers. It shows humility, need and repentance. If you are truly sincere with what you have expressed, God will meet you where you are. But I think you already know this; now just have faith in the One who knows you better than you know yourself.
My dear Gina, my queen for ever, you do not cease to amaze me with your pleas to the Big Guy! I will talk about your work first, then your path, which is a test of fortitude. Believe me, I can do this! This poem is very intelligently written. You speak to the Lord the way a child should speak to his parents, trustingly and openly, nothing hidden, because parents know more, parents know best. In this piece, you threw away all those meaningless words that we tend to use when we pray. You became one with The Lord! Though I continue to tell you about the length of your work, for the most part, your long poems seem to pull together at the end. This is not easy to do, so I trust that you know what you're doing when you put me through these long poems. For the most part, long poems affect fluidity and there is a hint of that here. But your imagery, as usual, is vividly narrated and your use of language -which has greatly improved- adds so much to the freshness and premise of this piece. Your visual cues are awesome, like the use of the word knife, to show your pain and affliction. The Lord knows us better than we know ourselves. He is not oblivious to our trials and tribulations. He is fully aware of what it is that we need. He knows exactly what you need to become a better person, parent, friend, wife, daughter, etc. You need to pass the test. Do not give up. Your test will be over before you realize it and wisdom, as you asked for, shall be yours!!! In one of your lines, you meant, "wholeheartedly."
Welcome !
