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Someone Sent Me A Note
by Richard Reed Jr
copyright 05-10-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
someone sent me a note
not-
icing that
my poem contained a mi-
stake
which I would have loved to
stick in her heart-

ily

i went about my business

with her note stuck in my
craw ling

into bed that night
it was most difficult to
get rid of her note's thrust...........s............topping me
from getting some well-needed

shut...............eye

wondered just what it was

both both-

ering my mind and sleep-

ing on: it

came to me


there was no good in her note

no good
morning
good
afternoon evening goodnight nor


good

bye

I note that she hasn't
..noted me again
Take note:

Good riddance




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09-07-2007 Tammy Frascona    

I understand how you felt when writing this one...I think I take criticism well but from the way it sounds, I don't think you had much choice than to take it and let it be what it was ... someone else's opinion!
When I first read this, title not on my mind, I figured it was a lover or girlfriend that upset you so much by her words and unwritten words that I anticipated a completely different ending but I really liked the one you came up with... she wasn't worth your time!
I guess I'm glad to hear it was just the nasty opinion of a jealous author!
Talk with you soon! Tammy F ****
08-19-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

*****Author's Note*****

It was not the criticism that bothered me;
only the cold hearted way in which it was
like a scissors on paper ~cuttingly delivered~

I didn't "mean" to be "mean"!

Awwwwww what the hell, we're only human.........

I think!?

~Rich
05-29-2006 BJ Niktabe    

*whew* I went back through some of your work to see if I had made the mistake of pointing out any - err - ors. Nope! :) Not me! *takes a deep breath and sighs in relief*
I hope no one *me* makes any mistakes in the future. *makes a mental note to self*

I love the style you wrote this with!
Thanks!
BJ
05-11-2006 Regina Pate    

How mean, I hope you weren't talking about me. I never notice anyting wrong in your poems, any way even though this one hit too close to home for I me, I could almost smell the dissapointment on your breath(smells worse than onions by the way lol) I still enjoy it) You wrote this with style and tackfulness that only you can. Great write, good job, thanks,

Regina
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