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Familiar Weakness
by Tiffany Forster (Age: 21)
copyright 07-23-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
This is it
The final moment
My last chance

Here is where I walk away
The point where
I turn to stone

Stop right there
Don’t come closer
The walls aren’t back up yet

This is it
My final chance
To burn the faerie tale nightmare

This is when I …
-I can’t
I feel the familiar weakness

There is a weak link
A flaw
In the façade of it all

I can feel it growing
As you come closer
Please don’t

You know I can’t do this
But I want to
I can’t do this again

The sound of beating wings
The echo
Is heard over the crumbling of resolve.

(( -_-* Umm... ))


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08-31-2006 Alysyn Bourque    

The beautiful thing about this piece is it allows for varied interpretations. It could be the approach of a cute guy in a social setting after a break-up, or cold feet during a wedding ceremony...or anything in between.

I like that it flows nicely. I'm not a big fan of free verse, but you utilize the style masterfully.
08-25-2006 Walter Jones    

Edge of sound, play with mix of feeling and words, images comes for the ride, clever, well crafted.. Walt
08-09-2006 David Pekrul    

It sounds like he has a hold on you that you can't fight off. I could hear your struggle to resist and your final submission. Interesting little piece.
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