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The Voice

by David Pekrul
copyright 05-15-2006


Age Rating: 10 +

I hear a voice, which calls me from afar,
I know not what it means or what it wants,
I hear it now as thunder in a jar,
A muffled voice, but in my dreams it taunts.
It speaks my name and beckons me to come,
I try to run, but cannot get away,
It frightens me, but also I’m intrigued,
My heart is bold; my feet are made of clay.
I hear it clearer than I did before,
It speaks to me of things done in my past,
Accusing me of sins as yet unmourned,
My sins, of which are many, and so vast.
So, I am on my knees and start to pray,
To find some peace, which holds the voice at bay.




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        06-29-2006     Jessica Peters        

Very nice, this holds a great message and brings it across very clearly. I like the style you used, too. It's really awesome.

        05-19-2006     Roger Crique        

Our actions bring with them repercussions and I think that this is the voice that this poem refers to. The subject of this poem is being called to look back and check his tracks, for he must atone for a previous act. This is what I sense from reading this poem. Very solemn and contemplative poem! The imagery and flow work well here.



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