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01-06-2008
Mike Gallimore
This was great! -- not just in the very clever use of the otherwise annoying default page layout -- but in the storytelling, too. You remind us that there are no roses without thorns, as even Henry VIII found out when he married Kathryn Howard. I'd say this is the best way of saying "love hurts" since the Everly Brothers. Thanks.
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12-17-2007
Rikki Visser
This is an amazing work of literature. The style and the form that he created is really, incredibly unique. and now I'm going to stop trying to sound intelligent. I love this poem. it is the most incredibly creative, clever, inventive, sad, true, interesting...I'm running out of adjectives, but, you get the point. the greatest work i have seen of the literary art in ages and ages!
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12-17-2007
Samantha Powers
I see you have many comments and already so many views on this poem, haha mind sending some of those readers my way? lol i sure could use a few.
This was amazing, the formant the flow this is definiatly one of my favorites.
You are one of my favorite writers and a new piece from you is like the first day of spring all over again everything is blossoming and looks amazing the imagery is amazing
this piece however has a sad twist to it and describes how love can be so cruel yet it never stops us from loving.
This definiatly deserved its title of winning
Sammy of the CC
You are amazing
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12-10-2007
Everett (dale) Pogue
Let's have a club meeting. Item of business: "Mr. Chairman, I move Richard Reed Jr. be henceforth now and forever be barred, disbarred
and dismissed for diss poem.It is entirely too clever, funny, sad, original, and masterful to be allowed among common poets." "he ws trunk over leaves in love" - what a line!...."decks are stacke...d...ice are loaded" too much!
Can we give sixes or sevens or eights? (How did he do that?)
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06-05-2006
Jessica Peters
This is really good and makes people really think about a lot. I love it! You did an excellent job, keep it up!
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05-27-2006
Elisabeth Hatheway
This poem sends out a lot of messages. I loved it! You must be a nature lover, are you not? Trees seem to be very sacred forms of life and yet man treat them as something threatening. Trees do seem to resemble people in form and structure. Nature is a part of man and man is a part of nature.
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05-21-2006
Irina Guschina
Very interesting form of poetry! I have never seen it before... Really, well done!
Thanks!
Irina.
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05-18-2006
James Shammas
Reed,
I really like this, and how you can experiment freely with different forms. This one, too, gets better with repeated readings, but still makes a powerful first impact. It's hard to comment on all the elements that make this a fine poem: the form, and the way it helps convey the message and the mood. William Carlos Williams would be proud.
Jim
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05-17-2006
Regina Pate
Good Karma my friend, be good to her and she sure will be good to you. She has seen your good deed and now you are caught up in the bountious flow of the universe. The first rule to magic is input equals output. What you put in you get out. And Karma will come back around three fold. So send out positive energy and see what happens. You have begun your path of a thousands miles and you just took your first step. Great write, good job, thanks, very creative my friend,
Gina
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