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Tick Tock BOOM; why?
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 05-16-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Tick tock my times running out,
Tock tick I'm feeling weird,
BOOM I fall to one side,
Somethings not right.

Exams and neurologists,
machines and dreams,
I'm so scared,
Tick tock what do I do?

Constant pain,
Nausea, and more,
This is a migraine but worse,
It just doesn't stop.

Can't work,
Can't sleep,
Can't go out,
And tired.

I feel like being dark,
Being alone,
Fighting the pain, like I fought them,
I can't get stressed.

Unconscious,
I can't remember,
Just don't make me stressed,
Don't leave me.

I'll be okay,
I'll get better, please...
Promise don't leave me,
You said you loved me no matter what,
I need you...


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08-07-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

I can hear your voice. I can feel your pain. Was this an isolated incident, or one of many?
Great write, but it makes me sad to feel your pain.

Rich
05-19-2006 Regina Pate    

That was very stressful for me to read. I hope everything is okay with you now, I really enjoy reading your work, I like the way you rhyme and your style is great, great write good job, hope all is well, thanks,

Regina
05-18-2006 James Shammas    

A migraine? A spurned lover. Call the neurologist. That's me! Really!
The poem's cute, but a little jarring (Maybe you meant it that way, in the speaker's distress). I can sense the sentiments, but I'm not sure what actual incident (perhaps many?) is being portayed.

Jim
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