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Bitter break up
by Amy B. (Age: 17)
copyright 05-24-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
You said you would always be there for me,
so where were you on that cold dark night?

Constricted by memories of darkness and pain,
I thought nothing would ever be all right.

I used to look at you and smile,
at your promising truthful face.

I thought you were my soul mate,
but I guess that wasn't the case.

When you left I felt like dying,
I felt so out of place.

But now I know you're a waste of time,
and you won't be hard to replace.




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10-29-2007 Leah G.    

Break-ups are crummy. This was a good poem and I liked your rhymes. I think that you should capitalize Break in the title and put a hyphen between Break-up. I liked how you illustrated your emotion rather than just venting straight out about all your anger about the break-up. That makes is very mature. And i love your positive ending. Most likely, that guy was a complete waste of time anyway. Great job with this. Post more!

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10-08-2006 Shannon W.    

Ahhh the bitter break up. I hate those things.
Anyways nice write.
Shannon
08-27-2006 David Pekrul    

Breakups are never easy, but I'm glad you decided to put it behind you and get on with your life. This is a good poem, you have expressed yourself well.
05-25-2006 Vicki G.    

Breakups are horrible, and I know how it is. I wonder if you wrote this poem because of a break up. Good work.
05-25-2006 Anthony Donnaville    

Very good write. A lot of feeling into this. A man/boy who treats a woman/girl this way is a waste of time. Hope you do find your soul mate. Excellent write.
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