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I resemble this one! LOL! But, I must say, you have touched on a couple of different points in your life and related them fairly well.
I especially like the last stanza. It was a great ending for this piece.
There seveal other lines that particularly caught my eye, like the second stanza. This one is typically YOU! :) hehe.
Fix your 'fast forward', as David pointed out. It's worth the effort.. Love, Mom
You have some great lines here, such as, "I've slept my life away," and the last stanza. Many people want to end (I'm not suggesting you are) and they take the easy way out, but do we know what's after death? I guess we'll never know. I like the fast forward and rewind concepts. Time is of the essence and it shows in your poetry. Very well done my Queen!
I love your style and rhymes. It reminds me a little of my style, but better.I believe my insanity is far worse. I can't ever write again.
This is extremely professional.
There is great energy in this writing, and you seem to be pulling the reader along for the ride.
I can almost see the crazy mixed-up world you are experiencing.
One small typo "Backup, fastfoward, (should be 'fastforward') turn around"
I have to say that you have a strange poetry form, but it seems to work for you.
Welcome !
