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Expression In Shades And Hues

by Richard Reed Jr
copyright 06-10-2006


Age Rating: 10 +

A dream lies sleeping in the heart
waiting for the soft touch
of the bold poetic pen

like a fair-faced spinster
jealous of the shades and hues
of the artist's clever brush

while in her own kit of
makeup prim and proper
with the many caught bouquets
strewn about her life
along with piled-high sketches
of analyzed design

lie the tools to be a poet




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        06-12-2006     James Shammas        

I like the way you capture that ineffable moment, that truly huge moment, when the artist in all of us can make just one decision that can affect so much, and with far-reaching consequences. The reference to colors, here, can really take on many metaphorical meanings.
I tried to convey something of that eternal moment in "Making Spaces" (something like that), though in a very different way.
Well done!-- in a free internal rhyme style I enjoy.

Jim



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