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06-12-2006
James Shammas
I like the way you capture that ineffable moment, that truly huge moment, when the artist in all of us can make just one decision that can affect so much, and with far-reaching consequences. The reference to colors, here, can really take on many metaphorical meanings.
I tried to convey something of that eternal moment in "Making Spaces" (something like that), though in a very different way.
Well done!-- in a free internal rhyme style I enjoy.
Jim
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