The End
by
Haley R.
(Age: 14)
copyright 06-12-2006
Age Rating: 7 to 127
*Note: All things in italics are written by Leigh G.
(Bwahaha! Yet another poem by the both of us!!)
The wind seems to carry me closer,
To things I cannot see
Oblivion possible? The light only seems to dim,
Twilight quickly fades.
Night is closing in.
Stars start to flicker away.
The moon is a distant memory.
For the end is near. There is no difference between the sky and the earth
The world is collapsing.
Earth cracks.
The seems of my heart are strained.
My strength is wavering.
The land is cracking.
The end is near. The ground vanishes from under me,
Something that will forever haunt what's left of me,
Along with your memory,
I'm falling down,
Into the depths of the unknown, The sun will never rise again.
You were my sun,
Shining through the day.
You were my moon,
Guiding me through the night,
Now it's different.
The sun will never rise again... The end has come...
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Haley, I'd say that Leigh wrote this and you helped. You know, Leigh wrote 22 lines, and you wrote 7. ;) Ah well, it was pretty good! It sounded enigmatic, and thoughtful, all very good elements needed for a very good poem. Great wording; powerful phrases in there! The only mistake I could pick up is that "the seems of my heart" should be spelled "the seams of my heart". Once again, good stuff!
Wonderful Haley! I'm glad I could help you with this one! And you used "Bwahahahah!" instead of "Mwahahah!!" I'm a "Bwahahaha!" person... Anyhow, it's 12:30, so this'll be a quick comment. I'll comment again intelligently... I'm glad I could help, and your idea was great! I hope to see many more great poems like this one, and we really can do some good work together! We make a good team, huh? I'll be sure to flag down Mehrina and Jordan. :) Want to know something odd though? I can't make my poems rhyme, but I can make my friend's poems rhyme...go figure. Keep writing! (I'm partly talking to myself, huh?)
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