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Sinking
by David Pekrul
copyright 06-14-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Sinking
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Sinking in a quicksand,
Of broken hopes and dreams,
Praying for deliverance,
From Satan's wicked schemes.

Looking for acceptance,
I try to find my way,
Tryin' to live a holy life,
But from my God I stray.

Sinking ever deeper,
I fight for every breath,
Haunted by the things I've done,
Until I enter death.

Then I quit my struggle,
And rise up to the top,
God in Heaven rescues me,
His mercies never stop.


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07-20-2006 Greg Kis    

Dave... In this day and age, I think too many folks never reflect on their actions or their consequences... the modern age. No one can accept guilt... but they can assign blame.
06-22-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Hi David,

Thanks for entering my contest, and, YES your poem was flawless as they all are. Jessica's tugged my heartstrings a bit more.

ta,

Rich
06-18-2006 BJ Niktabe    

This is a beautiful piece of writing. I like the subject, and as always, you have made it seem effortless, with a rythm that just rocks. I hope your vacation was wonderful as well as inspirational, and it's good to see you back.
06-15-2006 Jessica P.    

Wow this is really good, I think you're going to win the contest:P. Your poem is a lot smoother than mine and mine isn't as even and well, yours is like, flawless.
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