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Sailing
by BJ Niktabe (Age: 50)
copyright 06-24-2006


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  Sailing
Picture Credits: http://home.comcast.net/ ~fmetzger3/otherphotos.html

Floating on the rippling tide
The wind just pushes on
Sailing through the darkest night
And through the break of dawn

The ocean, as it rocks and waves
Sings a lullaby
As I watch the dolphins play
The seagulls softly cry


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12-17-2006 Euna P.    

What a great poem. Short, to the point, and extremely powerful. I can't say anything more. No complaints about anything. What freedom one feels on the sea. This poem made me remember that feeling... thanks.
11-12-2006 Deborah Thomas    

Can I go too? :) Short, but potent. I feel the rocking of the water... OMG! and I just caught myself squinting into the sun on the water!! LOL!! I am sitting in my room in the shadows! You have clearly ignited my vivid imagination...
Debbie
07-29-2006 Robert Joseph Hughes    

Soft beautiful imagery! This poem has placed me upon a ship. I journey, I see nature at its best and worst. Very descriptive and leaving the reader with a few questions of their own. This poem is well written and will capture the imagination of whom that reads.
07-15-2006 Greg Kis    

I get a sense of the freedom one feels on the sea, along with the vulnerability that nature can impose on those that enjoy it. Really liked it.
06-28-2006 Melissa Adams    

I loved it! It reminded me on when I got to go see the dolphins. I love the imagery. Great job :)
06-28-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Wonderful, beautiful, and nearly sad. Very calm and relaxing... thank you for sharing it. You say so much in such a short amount of lines... I really should learn from this! :-)

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