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This was cute. I think in the old days things where a lot nicer because mother would actually be around.
I like your rhyming in this one it flows so beautifuly and definatly adds to the poem. It is nice to think of the little memories i have with my mom. She is still with me but I don't really get many memories from her. Most of them seem to be bad and sad to say my mother is selfish.
So in my imagination this poem makes me happy to think I have a mom that is there. So in some sort of way i guess i'll thank you for writing this for me to read.
No errors as usual and a contest winner of course
Im going to go read more of your work =)
I enjoy reading your work very interesting it is like a book and I can't wait to get to the next chapter.
Samantha
Well once again I gave a talent show and too many talented people showed up, lol.
They were all winners, but for the clever way he rhymed each last line of each stanza, the winner is that well-known master of rhyme and rhythm David Pekrul for his outstanding work "Mother's Apron". This is a most instructive poem and everyone should study it's form, rhyme and rhythm.
Congrats David and as for the rest of us, myself included-"Better writing next time."
Thanks for entering my contest David. This is a well-crafted poem with certainly, warm and heart-felt sentiments. It's a treasure. You always make it so difficult for me to judge my conteststs.
You set the bar so high, not only with your skill, but with your pure and caring love.
Thanks for stopping by my site. I'm a bit under the weather and you brightened my day as you always do.
David, this is fantastic. I have been waiting to see what article of clothing someone could write a poem about. I've tried a couple of times but nothing worked. So, once again, I've gotten inspiration from your work. I need to get busy to see what I can come up with. I'm not out to beat you, because your's is awesome. It reeks of mother's love. Great job.
Thanks so much Brian.
How could I make a mistake like that? I've just entered this into a contest, so will have to wait until it is over before I can make the correction, but thanks for noticing it.
This flows along well, in fact I found myself singing the words, it's rather like a folk song.
Well done David.
I have one critique, I think you mean pour, not pore.
Brain.
Welcome !
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