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I'm Five Years Old

by David Pekrul
copyright 07-02-2006


Age Rating: 7 +

I’m five years old, but almost six,
My mommy says I’m big,
I play outside in lotsa dirt,
Because I like to dig.

My nana’s name is Granny Smith,
She gives me lotsa stuff,
My brother’s name is Jason Smith,
But he plays really rough.

And…um ,um ,um…and…you know what?
One time when I was small?
My mommy got me all dressed up,
And took me to the mall.

Do you like licorice bubble gum?
I thinks it’s really cool,
One time I blew this bubble?-----
------Next year I go to school.

My daddy says that pretty soon,
We’re going to Disneyland,
That always makes my mommy smile,
She says, “That will be grand.”

Some grownups talk all kinda strange,
I don’t know what they mean,-----
My sister likes this older guy?
I think that he’s fourteen.

I gotta go, it’s time for bed,
And Daddy gets real mad,
If I stay up real late at night,-----
My uncle’s name is Brad.




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        07-10-2006     Debra Rose        

This made me laugh. It was totally random and reminded me of the way that children talk. Disconnected and so hyperactive. This was a great work, very cute, very sweet, and definitly charming!

        07-10-2006     Jessica Peters        

Aww it's so cute! I love how you put it in a child's perspective, and made it like the short attention span they have! I love it!

        07-05-2006     Sammy Anderson        

Aww SO cute!I don't remember what I was like at five, but I know I still ramble like this! lol

-Sammy

        07-03-2006     Brian Dickenson        

This brought a smile to my face. Sounds like a five year old, a pretty intelligent one at that.
Is this a reflection of the way you were?
On second thoughts, was Disneyland around when you were five? lol lol.



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