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Brothers, My Brothers
by Amelia Z. (Age: 16)
copyright 07-08-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Brothers, they're evil
They plot your demise.
They set you up,
And tell lots of lies.

They frustrate you,
And make you scream.
Under fake acts,
They're not what they seem.

They mess with your things.
They make lots of noise.
I guess they can't help it,
After all they are boys.

They talk really loud.
They fight and they yell.
They blame things on you,
And make your life hell!

They hit and they kick,
And they pull on your hair.
They mock you and laugh,
But you're still forced to care.

Family is family.
They'll still be your brothers.
Despite you dislike it,
You wouldn't want any others.

Because in the end,
They're still in your heart.
You balance each other,
You're the sweet to their tart.


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12-12-2006 Leigh G.    

This is a nice poem! The flow was really good, and though I don't have brothers or sisters I have heard the horror stories and I'm glad to be an only child. This is a nice poem that made me laugh! I didn't catch any grammar or spelling errors here, and I'm glad you took care of capitalization and punctuation. I have read many poems that I had to sit there and try decoding it... This is a cute poem, and I think the closest thing I have to siblings is my cats. They make messes, demand attention, unplug things behind the brains of your PCs...and leave you heart-felt gifts in the litter box. Good work, keep writing!


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12-01-2006 Tasha W.    

Very good, this made me laugh! I know what it's like to have a brother, I have one older(he's OK), one younger (he is annoying) and a baby brother (he's cute ^^). This is so true and thank God, I now have a baby sister! But no matter how much they get on your nerves, they care for you, and you do care back...well in most cases¬.¬'


09-29-2006 Amy B.    

So true. I have been "cursed" with 3 older brothers. The torture never ends huh? Excellent poem. *Gives 5*


07-16-2006 Elisabeth H.    

The title caught my eye; it reminded me of this song I really like...I think it's called Brother, My Brother? It's really inspirational, it teaches us about brotherly love and how even though we may get into a lot of fights, we are all one. As for me, since I have no brothers, I can imagine this but it would be easier to experience having a brother...but from your experiences, I probably wouldn't want to have one:-)


07-14-2006 Mehrina B.    

Every single line was absolutely true! Me, I have two bigger brothers, and I describe them as cruel, inconsiderate, degenerate idiots! But you know, you're right. They're family, and I still care about them, even though they don't care about me! Great poem, humorous, and funny! 5 stars all the way through!


07-11-2006 BJ Niktabe    

This is a good write! I only have one brother, but I know that brothers can be hell. But like you said, "Family is family." They always will be, and they'll always be there for you. They are the ones you can always count on when you need them!

BJ


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