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It has been awhile since I have reviewed one of your poems, has it not? This poem is so well-written I do not know where to begin... but the greatest strength is its flow and meter. It seems to flow naturally, as if the speaker is boasting about (or recounting regretfully) his meeting with the lady of questionable morals. Another solid aspect is the choice of phrases, especially comparing her to a "goddess in the making" and the presumably low motel being elevated to a "holy city" equal in stature to Jerusalem or Mecca. There is also a lively visual aspect to the poem, giving the reader a sense of this demon in disguise having a distinct appearance and perhaps even a scent. Great job!
Great poem. Very visual and full of passion. I'm a new member and I like this one the best... of those I've read. I will have to read more of your poems. Greg Kis
This is a really good poem, yet I'm not quite sure what to say. Of course, the meter and rhyme are both great. It flows very well. The images this paints in one's mind are, well, vivid, to say the least! I guess that makes this one worth five!
Wow, this is really.....awesome! Although I find the message somewhat hard to grasp, because I mean, I get it, and I know what you're saying, but at the same time I don't really understand it. It had really good rhythm and rhyme though!
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