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The poem is very nice, but made doubly poignant by the picture. I enjoyed that character in the series very much. It is pretty well known that Naoko-sama didn't approve of the way the Sailor Starlights were handled in the final season. In fact, she was really surprised that the anime writers made them the focus of the Stars season. All that aside, I really liked Anime Seiya, and thought they did a good job of making him a fit rival for Usagi's heart. The episodes where Seiya realizes he cannot win and reconciles himself to it are among my favorites.
The poem does a pretty good job of capturing that sense of final recognition that one has failed, even as one tries to salvage anything one can from the loss. Good job.
awww... Meh- that was so sweet! It had a great flow and rhythm. It also (duh, nuh, nuh, nuhhh...) RHYMED! Amazing! See- i knew you could rhyme. It just takes practice. I still like your free verse poems too. Great write! (i''m sorry i didn't give you praise points. I only have one point left!)
This flows so completely natural, unforced. The rhymes also had that same feel, unforced. Yet your message comes across in the same way. This is really excellent!
A very bitter-sweet poem tinged with a dark, haunting quality. The tone of the poet's voice was very convincing and not over done. A mixture of simplicity and complexity, with really clever
rhyming. Good descriptive words matching well the tone of the poem. This poem really expresses your feelings in a way that touches me deeply and I'm sure touches everyone else that reads it.
Thank you for sharing this, thank you for visiting my site and commenting, and most of all, thank you for being my constant and steady friend.
I need not say who this reminds me of. I really really like this one. It reminds me of something I would write, because I imagine I'm talking to the person a poem is based on, or can give me the proper feelings for a piece. This has a very smooth speech pattern thing-a-ma-bobber to it. Beautiful, girl. Who is this man? ;)
Alright...I'm calm now, and not unfocused and battling a friend in IM. Don't ask... Like I said, your choice of words was great, and so was the flow. I'm still in shock though! You really tell a story in this one, and since this is by you, one of my best friends Meh-chan, ;), I don't find any spelling or grammar mistakes. The story you tell is heart wrenching, coupled by great descriptions and all of the like. Forgive me for the incorrect praise before...I've been reading some bad poems recently... As I was saying, I see you've blended a few of the idea of the poems you ran by me earlier, and I also see you used some ideas I gave you. :) This is a great piece, and I hope to see many more to come!
Wow! This was amazing! I like the rhyme pattern a lot! It worked well, and flowed. I especially like the last stanza, and the last line. "Do you not love me to?" I think it's so incredibly inoccent and sweet. And also I like how you talk about not wanting love if it was like how you described it. It made the "Narrator", you might call it, like a person that I could really relate to!
Nice Job!
The Commenting Crusader,
Haley
p.s. You have completely mastered the art of love poems! CLAPS FOR MEHRINA!!!!!!
MY LORD MEHRINA!!!! A LOVE POEM?!?!?!?!?!?! I'm still in shock...miss anti-love, anti-romance, wrote a love poem? You only like to read about love!!! Alright...I'm done picking on you. :)
The flow and choice of words on this piece are wonderful, you did a really great job with this. I'll make this comment, to beat Haley to the honor!!! Great work, keep writing!
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