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The Flower pt 3
by Tammy Frascona (Age: 25)
copyright 09-08-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  The Flower pt 3
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There is no question that I love this Bee,
Whether he knows it or not he too is in love with me.
What reasons does he have to deny?
I do not want to believe that he would lie.
He comes to me time and time again, needing my sweet nectar,
I know he has gone to other flowers but how can I be the objector.
I understand that it is our way of life;
In the plant world we could never be man and wife.
It still saddens me that some other Venus Fly Trap has had my Bee.
There are so many other Bees but this one is mine to decree.
Why this one.... and not the others you ask?
He is my one and only true match!
He a Bee and I a Flower though?
Opposites attract and happiness is what we bestow!
On each other like honey to a comb,
And pollen to a Pistil; it just feels like home!!!


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10-03-2007 Steven C.    

Tammy: This is well done. the picture is meant to show more than the bee. The only thing i noticed that you may want to correct is Pistol to Pistil. Other than that, this is excellent.
09-13-2007 Everett (dale) Pogue    

Tammy: The Flower pt3 is cleverly done. I think the picture, perhaps is meant to move beyond bees. Whatever, it is an interesting premise and done well...except Pistol. That is a weapon. Pistil is the part of a flower where seeds grow. A pistil gives life to the future. A pistol mis-used does the opposite. Dale
09-08-2007 Frank Fields    

Curious, even fascinating. A blend of many things--the light and dark, fanciful and serious, even fear and courage. I'm not sure I totally understand it, but that doesn't prevent appreciation for a nice work ^^

On the technical: unless Pistol is being used satirically, it is mis-spelled.
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