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Sing, this soul....
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 07-09-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Sing, this soul,
despite your melancholy lacerations.
For I have found
despite your moans,
a sweet and taught temptation.
She lives in lands of shining suns
and gliding rivers to seas.
Her touch,
while still imagined
belongs alone to me.
Be well although you're weary,
for your penance be not in vain.
Should this smiling maid of honor
make a motion to abstain
until the time we trudge across
the bleak but living shore
to gather up our bounty chest--
to claim our new captor
then she will be eternally
the maid we shall protect
So prepare yourself
my weary soul
and please do not object,
For our princess lies in waiting
on the sea where dreams do fly
and we will fight--you and I
to make this Queen our Bride


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07-23-2006 Tiffany Forster    

Again, another beautiful poem. Although I will admit, I did not see it ending where it did.
Excellent work none-the-less!
Natalie is quite a lucky woman ^_^
-showers her in luff and stars-

Tiffany
07-12-2006 Tammy Frascona    

I have already e-mailed my comment.
07-11-2006 David Pekrul    

I love Australia too. I've been there only once, but it is a beautiful country. Maybe I'll go again.
Nice poetic write, good flow.
Of course I have to point out spelling errors (that's my job)
"Be well although your (should be "you're") weary"
"for your penance be not in veign (should be 'vain')"
07-11-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Very dreeeaaaamy and fantasy-like filled with beautiful butterfly metaphors flitting from dream to dream without end. May your poems never end!

Most fondly,

Rich
07-10-2006 Tammy Frascona    

When reading this title I thought it was going to lead somewhere completely different. I still think there should be a different title though. I liked everything else. It flowed good and was a lovely poem too. I love your use of metaphors in this one. Good Job Debra
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