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The Ring
by Jessica P. (Age: 15)
copyright 07-11-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
The ring has many meanings
Maybe love or hope or other
From so many various people
Like a husband, aunt or brother

You wear it on your finger
Or maybe toe if it fits right
it sparkles in the morning sun
At noon, and in moonlight

Three kinds of gold to choose from
There's white, yellow and pink
But don't dare put it in the water
It'll rust and even sink

Who did you get it from?
And for what purpose, may I ask?
Was it from a big business?
Or for doing a certain task?

The ring has many meanings
Maybe love or hope or other
From so many various people
Like a husband, aunt or brother


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07-18-2006 Jenna T.    

Very cute poem! Flows nicely, though as David said, gold doesn't rust...but otherwise, well done!
07-14-2006 Amelia Z.    

That's a cute poem! I like how it flows. Keep up the good work!
Amelia Z.
07-12-2006 Madeline C.    

Beautiful poetry,Jessica P.!The poem rhymes smoothly and well written.keep it up.

~Madeline C.
07-11-2006 David Pekrul    

Another good, smooth write. Rings have many meanings, some of which you have mentioned. I must correct some of the information about gold that you have provided, however. There is no such thing as pink gold, however there is "gold alloy" which is pink. Also, gold does not rust.
I guess we could call that 'poetic licence'.
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