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Upon Her Death
by Mali Neve
copyright 07-18-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Before the Silver City
Beyond the broken gate
Beside a wooden carriage
Her truest love does wait.

He waits among the flowers
He waits among the vines
He wears a golden halo
On him the bright sun shines

He smiles across the meadow
Beckons with his eyes
He lifts a hand in welcome
To him her Spirit flies
To rest within the circle
In his beloved embrace
And dwell within the safety
Of his enduring Grace

Before the Golden City
Beyond the jeweled gate
Holding out his hand to her
Again, her true love waits.


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04-14-2008 Susan Brown    

This poem makes my heart sing. The perfect gentleman waiting on the other side. What a lovely picture this paints for the lady who's true love crossed over before she did. Here he is holding the door for her one last time...beautiful!

Susan
07-23-2006 David Pekrul    

Love beyond this thing we know as life! Very sweet. Good rhyming and rhythm.
One small typo:
"If (did you mean 'in'?)

Even though the following is one complete thought, it would still look better broken into two stanzas:

"He smiles across the meadow
Beckons with his eyes
He lifts a hand in welcome
To him her Spirit flies"

"To rest within the circle
If his beloved embrace
And dwell within the safety
Of his enduring Grace his beloved embrace"
07-19-2006 Kimberly Murphy    

BEATUFULLY WRITTEN!!! Beatiful!! So sweet. I love it!!
Kim
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