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A Girl In A Magazine
by Greg Kis
copyright 02-04-2007


Age Rating: 16 to 127

  A Girl In A Magazine
Picture Credits: my photo

Is she really there?
Lyin' there on satin sheets
With a Mona Lisa smile
And heartbreak in her empty eyes

A girl in a magazine
That could satisfy your dreams
Use your imagination
And she'd stay with you a little while

When your woman's gone you feel so down
Sometimes you need a dark eyed dream
To carry you through the night
When love has vanished from your life
When love has vanished from your life

Is she really there?
Lyin' there so close to you
And you know you cannot touch her...
So you hold her with your lonely eyes

A girl in a magazine
That could satisfy your dreams
Use your imagination
And she'd stay with you a little while

When your woman's gone you see her smile
Can you read the whisper in her eyes?
She wants you - what you want
She waits for - what you need...

A girl in a magazine


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02-25-2007 Chessie Hodge    

This is a very beautifully writen work. I enjoyed the free verse (that's my favorite style). It is quite sad and realistic. I like the way that you needed each other in this piece. It set the tone very well. Sometimes we wish so much for something that isn't really there that in our minds it becomes more important than just a piece of paper. Life is hard, but worth it eventually.
Good job! Keep writing!

Chessie
02-17-2007 Walter Jones    

Voice bends with music, a easy off the tongue verse, message, mind triggers all build a well crafted song... Walt
02-15-2007 Misty Montier    

a girl in a magazine...I guess we all look for substitutes at one point or another...sometimes the fantasy is better than reality...lol...love the title, love the poem...it definitely reads very much like a song...
02-07-2007 Kimberly Angelone    

VERY GOOD! VERY REAL. VERY SAD. YOU'LL BE ALRIGHT. REALLY.
02-05-2007 Wayne Thomas    

Good job, Greg! Enjoyable, rhythmical, free verse that really emotes the anguish of both a lost love and an ersatz substitute. I like the togetherness the piece emotes, even if she is only "a girl in a magazine". Sometimes they can seem awfully real, eh? Still, hope you find better than ink on paper.
Wayne
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