New Love
by
BJ Niktabe
(Age: 50)
copyright 07-18-2006
Age Rating: 7 to 127
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There's nothing like a brand new love,
A broken heart it mends.
It fills your life like nothing else
You hope it never ends.
You soon forget the pain you felt,
New love replaces all.
You grow with it and soon you feel
That you are ten feet tall.
It's hard to eat and you can't sleep
And yet you're never tired.
In fact, you feel so energized
It's almost like you're wired.
Your love consumes your every thought,
Your every move it guides.
It drowns you in such happiness,
Sucked under by the tide.
It wraps itself around your heart.
It lives in every cell.
It emanates from every pore
I know this feeling well.
For when we met, I knew I'd found
What I'd been searching for.
I've found my place in life, with you.
I know I'll look no more.
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The flow and grace of your poem is a breath of fresh air in a world that doesn't seem to care about what's good and beautiful in this life. Just call me a true romantic.
Nancy
You described love perfectly untill the last word and last feeling. Your style of writing and use of words i liked alot. The poem is smooth from the beginning till end. Keep up the good writing and now i'll have to find time to read more of you're poetry.
Now, how romantic is this! It's strange how a new love can make you forget all about the past pain and make everything brand new.
This poem is easy to read, nice flow, unforced rhyming. I never tripped once in the reading, it melted like butter.
This is so sweet. It starts out a little tenuous and then gets stronger, like a new relationship. I can relate to the sentiment- the man I'm madly in love with now is a far cry from anyone I've known before, and with him everything is new.
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