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I Hate You
by Mali Neve
copyright 07-24-2006


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
I hate you.
I want to watch while your flesh burns
and falls in glowing embers at my feet

I hate you.
I want to hear your agony and misery
piercing the shroud you tried to bury me in

I hate you.
I want to smell the stench of your fear
filling up my senses the way mine used to do

I hate you.
I want to taste the salt of your tears
wetting my lips where blood stains once blossomed

I hate you.
I want to feel your grip releasing me
as you struggle to stand upright again

I hate you
I want to know that the pain you forced upon me
is revisited and magnified in the dark place that is your Soul

I hate you for making me hate you,
for tarnishing my Spirit.
and I hate you for knowing that I loved you
and not giving a damn at all.




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07-24-2006 David Pekrul    

Very angry. It's good to vent. I think you could have made the same strong statement without repeating the words "I hate you" so frequently. Maybe only two or three times throughout the poem would have been sufficient, but that is only my opinion.
07-24-2006 James Shammas    

This is a steam-roller of hate-- effectively written to convey this most volatile and intense of emotions.

Jim
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