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The Farmer In The Dell (The darker side)
by David Pekrul
copyright 07-23-2006
Contest Winner


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
The farmer in the dell,
He ‘fell’ into a well,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
The story’s here to tell.

It seems he took a wife,
But then she took his life,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
She killed him with a knife.

The wife had a child,
He grew up very wild,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
His mother never smiled.

The child had a nurse,
Who criticized and cursed,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
It couldn’t have been worse.

The nurse had a ‘cow’,
Because he wouldn’t bow,
To, all things she said and did,
And things she’d not allow.

He lived like a dog,
Confused and in a fog,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
Caught up inside a cog.

He fought like a cat,
And acted like a rat,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
He turned into a brat.

He thought he was ‘big cheese’,
And never would say please,
Soon, life would strike him down,
And bring him to his knees.

The ‘cheese’ stands alone,
He’s out on his own,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
His heart is hard as stone.

The story has been told,
The way it did unfold,
Hi-ho, the derry-o,
And leaves us feeling cold.


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04-15-2007 Samantha P.    

Well I don't really think the last comment was appropriate. Funny is definiatly not what i'd call this. A bit akward, and very dark (so it says) Killed him with a knife? seemed a bit cruel. I didn't really so much of a point except that all of our actions effect someone somehow.
Not really one of my favorites. The rhyming was pretty good in someways it added to the poem by making everything fit together. In other ways it took away from it because the word choice for some of the words rhymed wasn't so great.
I see you like entering your work in contests and you usually win =) good job on that
Samantha
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08-05-2006 BJ Niktabe    

OMG!! That is so funny. I didn't read it, I sang it! LOL You always amaze me with your creativity, David! Awesome!


07-23-2006 Jessica P.    

Hmm this is pretty god...I was going to enter that contest, and still will, IF I can think of something dark enough... and that's the problem...I don't know ho to make anything darkish... but yours was really good I like it a lot. Kind of dark for you though... well, I guess that's what it would have had to be.... 'cause it was for the contest, lol, 'kay I'll stop now. Really loved it!


07-23-2006 Tiffany Forster    

-gapes-
Wow... I love this!
It had me laughing, it's such a cheery rhythm with such a, well.. uncheery subject. Perfect!
-huggles it-
-showers David with shiney things and give him a pearl sakura blossom-
Wonderful!

-tips hat and rolls away-


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