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Crazy
by Jessica P. (Age: 15)
copyright 07-24-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
I don’t think that’s what it is
But you may think I’m going crazy
Money obsessed, and demon possessed
It doesn’t make sense to me

Has everybody just gone crazy?
They’re caught up in their jobs
And family comes last, no time anymore
They try to patch things up with mere cotton swabs

Divorce, murder, deceit and retreats
Too scared to try anything, too caught up with money
No time for God, church and family time
Like I just said everyone’s going crazy




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08-06-2006 David Pekrul    

I agree wholeheartly with Roger's comments, and as I highly respect his comments and opinions on just about everything, you should take his comments as a great compliment.
Your writing is getting better all the time, Jess. Keep it up.


08-03-2006 Roger Crique    

I like what you've done here. The content of this piece is a very strong and somber one. People have changed their priorities. No longer time for family and definitely money hungry. It is nice to see that at such a young age, you are preoccupied with the state of the world. This is good. There's lots of imagery and it flows rather nicely. Keep up your push to understand things beyond the normal!


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