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A Thinker
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 07-31-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I'm A thinker,
Nothing bad about that; right?
Wrong,
I'm suffering for being me.

There's so many questions I have,
But none have ever been answered,
There's too many to count,
This can't be.

Darkness has surrounded me,
My life collapsed in the black hole,
The one I asked to swallow me,
When I just wanted to disappear.

There's so many colours in life,
So why am I only seeing black?
Outside I look okay,
But inside it's another world.

My mind has papers everywhere,
And every-things unorganized,
Different songs playing for every little memory,
And tears for every disaster.

It can never be okay,
I have to know why,
For every single little thing that happened,
I just have to know why.

Why did Luna die?
Why don't my parents love me?
Why was I left alone?
Why does Jose love me?

I wish things worked out my way,
I wish I still had my Grandad,
I wish everything was okay,
I just don't understand things, but I have to try.

Tell me why people hate me for caring!
Can you answer my questions?
Can you make my life easier?
Can you stop me from loosing myself in the darkness?


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08-04-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

This is a beautiful piece. I can hear your cries from the darkness. I have no answers -survival of the fittest? This so descriptive -it just reaches out and pulls the audience right in
to feel the suffering of all mankind with you.

You are a beautiful writer and a caring heart. I feel honored to have inspired it.

I hope I can inspire something happier next time.

Your friend,

Rich
08-02-2006 Lisa Harmon    

heya babe! i told you i would join didn't I? hahaha well ye just to say that your poems great...as always! But one thing...life's never as bad as we think it is. luv ya xxx
08-01-2006 Roger Crique    

Emily, some say that we sign our own contracts when we are born. Others say that we are dealt a hand and we must learn how to make the best of it. I personally believe that we come here to suffer, because suffering makes character and builds up strength. Life without tribulation would not be worth living. Your poem speaks for itself. You may be going through a period of unimaginable hurt, but you must collect yourself, dust yourself off and keep moving. All storms eventually die down. There is a line, "And every-things unorganized," I think you meant, "every thing's or everything." The reference you made of having, "papers on your mind," was a bit difficult for me to grasp. Maybe you should edit that line? Who was Luna? Don't forget you're writing for your readers. Other than that, you showed much despair and much unhappiness and it makes me want to reach out and hug you. So I send you a hug from where I'm at and lots of love and affection.
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