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Fickle Friendship
by David Pekrul
copyright 08-08-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Friendship, allegiance,
So fickle, so lame,
When one breaks a friendship,
Then who is to blame?

Honesty, openness,
Things of the past,
Without those two allies,
No friendship will last.

Time spent and time lost,
And who gives a damn,
Just take it or leave it,
"I am what I am."

Once we were happy,
And all was so good,
But then you got stupid,
I knew that you would.

Heartache and bitterness,
All that is left,
For you took the good times,
And left me the rest.


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10-06-2006 Sammy A.    

I've seen that so many times. It especially hurts when you thought it was one of your closest friends and they just go stupid on you. Thankfully I'm having good luck with friendships this year. Great work once again!

-Sammy


08-24-2006 Elisabeth H.    

Your words speak to me for I've had many friendships, ones that I think would've lasted but a person can change and sometimes it's better to get out of a bad friendship. Besides, it's better to have no friends than many bad ones.


08-09-2006 Lisa Harmon    

Brilliant poem,and how tiffany said how true indeed, friendships end as a part of life, but it doesnt make it hurt any less, my 2 favourite stanzas are also the same as tiffanys, especially the last 2 lines "For you took the good times,
And left me the rest"

Brilliant work


08-08-2006 Tiffany Forster    

How true indeed.
I really like this piece... a lot.
You have a brilliant flow to it and amazing rhyme and the content of the poem, while darker, fits the rhythm perfectly.
Time spent and time lost,
And who gives a damn,
Just take it or leave it,
"I am what I am."
That is my favorite stanza. It is so true. And the ending... I love the ending... heh, I love the whole thing ^_^
Brilliant work.
-showers him in luff and chocolate chips-
Cheers!

Tiffany


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