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Ice cream sundae
by Haley S. (Age: 10)
copyright 08-09-2006


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
You need two banana's
then you put two big
scoops of ice cream. Then one bag
of Reese's pieces,chocolate
syrup then one big
pile of whip cream
then a cherry on top
and you have HALEY'S
ice cream sundae


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03-26-2007 Christina Johnson    

Ice cream Sundae's they are very good and they some times. People just like. If just like a little scoop of ice cream and some fudge along with nuts on it now that can be very good on it. But to much of the cherries that can be very or way to much and the white stuff. That's going over board.
09-09-2006 Tammy Frascona    

The classics never fade away do they. Awesome sundae idea Haley! My kids love ice cream and I can't believe that I haven't made one for them yet! I will get on that ASAP!
08-29-2006 Jessica P.    

This sounds really good, although it lacks some detail but it sounds sooooo good^^.
08-18-2006 Alma H.    

Ditto to what Leigh said. You might want o add more detail, add a few words that are missing like a big scoop of what? Sounds really good. I like marshmallows. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
08-12-2006 Leigh G.    

Sounds good...I'd use M&Ms though. :) Well...you're most likely used to my story, but here's my edits.
1: The title should be Ice Cream Sundae
2: The first letter of each line should start with a capital letter
3: You mean bananas not banana's
4: You should use numbers
5: Make this a proper list, than you don't have to worry about proper puncuation
6: HTML is more mature and profecional than captial letters

Not too bad, you're good for only being a little kid. Good idea, good work, and keep writing.


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