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Mellow Yellow
by Richard Reed Jr
copyright 08-23-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
**Ultra modernistic form**




the
moon
looked

so cheesy-like

a mellow piece
of yellow:

cosmic mice had been
nibbling there: forever

giving it the appearance
of a pock
marked
old man.....s.....face
pout

ing
in the
good

old

days


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07-14-2007 Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli    

I REALLY REALLY REALLY like this poem! I don't think I've ever read an experimental poem before and I think that to write something like this is extremely cool! I think that while I sit here at my desk at work bored off of my mind, I might just "Experiment" with a piece and enter it into Samantha's Experimental poem contest :D

Thanks for the great read!

~Jenn
07-07-2007 Sam Hackel-Butt    

"They call me mellow yellooooow..." I miss that commercial :) ANYWAY, I LOVE THE FORM. I love reading experimental pieces, be in in content or in format. I liked how each 'stanza' could stand alone, but linked easily with the preceding/following stanzas. Full of great imagery. Please write more like this! Fantastic :)

-Sam
Of the CC
07-05-2007 Deborah Thomas    

Just what I needed tonight... a smile! ;)
I have to say... I had to read it a couple of times, because the structure seems to lead one to see brief images throughout, not the entire piece at first. Images springing to mind at each 'glimpse' of description; popping into scenes from childhood thoughts and observances. Something to ponder... I'll add this one to my list of things that make me go 'hmmmmm?' lol.
But in the end, simple, but not!
08-24-2006 Elisabeth H.    

The title is so cute but the poem is just adorable! I can only say this, "Bravo!"
~Very unique writing structure~
08-23-2006 BJ Niktabe    

I know I've said it before, but I think this style you use is cool! I've tried this, but to no avail.

I love the imagery...the cosmic mice nibbling! I remember being able to see that man's face when I was a kid...ah, the memories! *smile*
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