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Por Siempre
by Tiffany Forster (Age: 21)
copyright 10-06-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
There is something to be said
[mindlesswordsspoken]
A truth, a kind of peace
[plasticwordsbroken]
Sincerity
[itsalieforyouallaliefortruth]
for perfect words found
[tomakeyoujustfall]
and spoken
[fallformefallformefallfornothing]
At perfect moments
[shatteredandscatteredlikediamondsonsilk]
For ideal times to be
[ticktockticktockthisisthesound]
set
[thisisthesound]
destroyed
[thesoundofyourdeath]
and re-lived
[willyoulivegaininthelightmylove?]
For a brief flicker
[dancingshadowsabouthteflame]
of something that was only
[somethingsosimplesoeasysonew]
a shadow
[somethingonlyyoucouldgivemecanyougiveme]
a glimmer of what could have been
[doyouthinkyoucanseethroughthepaintedonliesandgivemea]
the future
[future?]



((I wish I knew what this was... but I simply don't...))


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10-21-2007 Roger Crique    

I was tempted to use your new-found style to tell you what I think about your poem, but I've decided to play it safe and to do it in theconventionalmanner. Oops, sorry! I must say that I experienced much difficulty reading this poem. However, once the veil of obscurity lifted from my eyes and I was able to piece together both poems, I was quite pleased to have read them. Both poems are intertwined as in a kind of duality, one needing the other for their own survival. I would love to see both poems stand separately on their own, oxymoron? Perhaps...
10-07-2007 Everett (dale) Pogue    

Tiffany: I enjoyed this poem[enjoyedisnotthebestwordbecauseitmademethink]. It was a new form I had never met.[whereintheworlddidshegetthatidea?] I had to read it more than once[howaboutfivetimes?]. You better get it patented if it is your idea. [toolateIamalreadyusingit}. Maybe we should all converse that way.[iwouldgetmyblockknockedoffbyaguyidon'tlikeverymuch]. Hey, this could be addictive![imayneverwriteanyotherwayagain] Thank you, Tiffany![andthenagainiamnotsosurehelp] dale
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