08-20-2012
Samantha Powers
Lol Well I wrote out everything, only to find that Rikki was still logged in under her Pnp. So hopefully her. aka my....comment shows up lol.
And since she is not a member anymore here is your wonderful praise for this
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08-20-2012
Rikki Visser
Your aim was to pain
SEASHELLS!
Sands, lining the sea
Ships are sailing
Your imagination found paradise
You lost the aim to paint
Seashells =(
Haha this is a very short poem, and i like what you did with it. It is also the only poem of yours that has no praise points...And I figured if Richard, has a poem that hasn't been praised there is something very wrong with that picture. Lol!
Anyways, it has been a long while since I have posted anything on your wall and would like to say that I miss reading your beautiful work, I saw your last piece was almost 2 years ago and I hope I get to read more soon. =)
-Sincerely Sammy =)
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09-20-2006
Denise Johnson
Not quite sure what you mean, but if it's what I think you mean then I would say -
'There are many to choose from.' overlaps to 'from the warm sands' & 'Are lining the sea.' overlaps to 'sea Ships are sailing'
I tried!
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09-12-2006
Alysyn Ayrica Bourque
I'm not exactly clear on what you are requesting. Overlapping of the two phrases within the sentences? Paradise Lost?
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