A Morning Wish
by
Tammy Frascona
(Age: 26)
copyright 09-14-2006
Age Rating: 18 to 127
A day like any other;it starts...
With us getting up at dawn, and awaiting your depart.
I lay in bed and talk....
As you get dressed in the dark.
Before you go... I get up to brush my teeth;
I tend to walk the house totally unsheathed.
You catch a glimpse of me as you pass the door,
And realize; after last night you want some more.
Entering the bathroom, I stand at the sink;
Drying my face, unaware that you are at your brink...
Of having your way with me as I'm combing out my hair.
I stop to look at you because of your arousing stare.
I say to you... "Are you going to be late today?"
And you say with a smile.." Only if I can have you my way!"
I nod my head "Yes" and bite my lip...
Rushing to me; you raise me up above your hip.
My rear is now on the same sink as before.....
You're grabbing my hips more and more.
One hand on my back now,
And another holding me closer somehow.
My hands are all over you as well...
Loving every minute of this as you can tell.
Bringing my feet back to the floor...
You turn me around quickly for an encore.
Fogging up the mirror in front of me;
I notice us in the images and get sent into complete ecstasy!
You slightly pull my hair and slap my bottom;
To let me know that you're about to cum.
I interrupt our engagement and kneel down in front of you,
I cup your pieces and begin thanking you;
This is my favorite part at times you see....
The look on your face, is more than enough for me.
Twisting and loving your shaft...
Sucking your head and perfecting my craft,
Holding your breathe getting ready to explode now
I smoothly and confidently take you all the way down..... holy cow!
With that moment you do in fact release,
Bracing the counter behind you; standing so pleased.
Officially very late for work today,
You decide to stay home so that we can again.... play!
This kind of thing has happened more than once but not as often now because we are not newly weds anymore! I wrote this as a wish because it has been so long since this kinda thing has happened. I enjoyed writing it now I hope you enjoy reading it!
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If this piece is for real, then you've got one lucky husband. I'm afraid my wife has always been a little too 'proper' for this kind of thing, so I envy your man.
I think I need to take a cold shower now. lol
This is a nice romantic/erotic moment you captured between a married couple. I don't know why, but I found it kind of charming.
I think the most noticable shortcoming this piece has is the rhyme scheme. It seems like you focused on finding rhymes before finding the right words. I would suggest keeping a poetic rhythm but ditching the rhyming altogether. Rhyming in this kind of poem makes it seem somewhat adolescent.
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