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Remember
by Jessica P. (Age: 17)
copyright 11-06-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Remember

*A tribute to all those who have, and are, fighting in the war*

They did indeed fight for us all
Our freedom and our lives
For our country they did fall
Some will never be revived

The pain and sorrow just trudged on
The content of wars was much
And when the night stars brought the dawn
The fields were red and such

And still, they fight, it never ends
Will freedom be never gained?
Pain in the eyes and happiness is bent
Not real, sincerity is drained

The trumpet sounds, then beats the drum
The soldiers march out to war
Now thunder roars, the time has come
To fight for freedom, now, once more

Do not forget, remember well
For each and every soul
They fought for freedom then they fell
For a single lonely goal




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06-26-2008 Brooke Marquette    

Amazing peom! Beautifully written and deeply felt. Truly a joy to read. Greatly descibes those who fight and risk their lives...we are so proud of them!!!! Good wrok on this peom! Amazing job!


11-25-2006 Kay Murphy    

Very wonderful indeed! I truly enjoyed this writing and wish I could send this to some of m family members, however, they are at war as of right now. Excellent work! You will go far.
Kay


11-10-2006 Shannon Walter    

This is really good! I my self am agaiant Bush and the war. I think it's stupid that our men and women are dieing out there.
Good job!
Shannon


11-06-2006 David Pekrul    

Wow, this is really good! And a good time to remember, as it is almost Nov. 11, Rememberance Day. In this country (Canada), we haven't seen our soldiers in a war for many years. My generation never had a war and it is sometimes hard for me to even imagine what it would be like to fight in one. But we must remember, and you have written a good poem, so that we will.
Thanks.


11-06-2006 Mehrina B.    

A strong, steadfast poem; a salute to those honorary men and women risking their lives so that others may live. I praise your work for its steady rhythm and powerful message. I especially like how you wrote this all in quatrains. A strong sense of patriotism simply put. And no spelling or grammar mistakes! Clean and simple, yet strong. Bravo!

Mehrina of the Commenting Crusaders


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