 03-09-2008 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
I stand here looking through my mind at pictures saved there. I remember times as a young boy, early in the morning in late December, snow on the ground and frost in the trees. Beautiful, as is your poem! I love ya Mary and don't you ever forget it! Anthony
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10-31-2007 Richard Reed Jr
I really loved the beautiful words you used strung together like Christmas tree lights.
To save me from the cold
leaving me hope with the coming spring.
Best for me was:
I close my eyes and think I see
A sweet memory staring back at me
Because when winter freezes summer gone
You whisper a promise of spring
Long may you write!
~Rich
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02-25-2007 Chessie Hodge
This is very beautiful. It may not be intended but as I read it I felt intensity. I really enjoyed it. Frost is awesome and so are you.
Chessie
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01-28-2007 Jeniffer Brand
Wow! This is the first poem I've read in 9 months and it was great. You haven lost your talent!
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01-04-2007 Wayne Thomas
This may be the first of yours I've read. At any rate, it's purely wonderful. Better than Frost in some instances, though I can't name the poems right off. This is truly an aural feast. I reach into my pocket and dig out a rare five stars!
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01-02-2007 James Shammas
Oh, shit! I forgot the 5 stars (I wish to give 10.)
Jim
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01-02-2007 James Shammas
God, this is freakin' good! I think I said before that you write like Keats. I'm especially amazed at how great you are with enjambment: the words flow effortlessly and without contrived force from line to line. Also intersting is that this four-stanza poem is essentially one or two sentences that flows wonderfully. (I think there are two, and you may have deliberately omitted a period or two.) In this vein, your poem also reminds me of Frost's "The Silken Tent," which is essentially a one-sentence sonnet.
Freakin' good!!
Jim
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11-23-2006 Richard Reed Jr
Because when winter freezes summer gone
You whisper a promise of spring
Awesome!
Frost could do not much better than this.
This poem sings to my heart like your distant songbird.
Thanks for writing this.
Rich
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11-21-2006 Melissa Adams
I really like this poem. It is beautiful. Your so descriptive that I can see it. A great write.
Great job.
Melissa
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