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Another inspired piece of poetry from someone who seems to have a talent for writing it. It has been awhile since I have read any poetry of yours. From the look of things, it is another solid effort on your part. Now where to begin?
The friendship motif is apparent from the start and is strong throughout the work. I also like your use of precious gems to describe the type of life some lead: somehow it seems appropriate considering the title and graphic of the poem. Such seemingly small touches mean a lot for those who value a good all-around work, and though I am not a master poet, I appreciate the skill of others. The value and power of friendship is best described in your words as "the opal bridge." A bridge made of a precious gem that can bridge any gap... an original touch.
If there is any criticism at all that I can offer, it is that in the middle it shifts from a light, reflective mood to a somber one. Perhaps you could elaborate a bit more about the moonstones that go off the path. What exactly happens to these moonstones? Perhaps it is for effect, so my criticism may seem pointless. However, that is the only real criticism that I could offer.
Overall, another good job from a skilled writer. Keep up the good work!
Hey Mehrina! I'm back!!
Anyway, I LOVE this poem! I like how you compared lives to different gems =]
I also like how the poem shifts from being about different people, to friendship.
It's great! =]
I'm so honored! I'm really glad you feel this way too, you sure said it a lot poetically! I said it with numerous bad rhymes, curses, and rather crude comparisons, and you were able to say it clearly in analogies normal people understand! Well...maybe normal people wouldn't understand, if an abnormal person like me did! I'm really honored to be called your best friend, I suppose it's time I submit the other poem to you I wrote. :) Thanks for lowering the age rating too. ;) I did that once, we all forget to take it off 18+ sometimes! Really great work, I hope you enjoy the poem I'm going to submit tonight. :)
Your BFFEFEEFAT! (Did I get it right this time?)
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Welcome !
