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three haiku (irregular)
by Wayne Thomas (Age: 58)
copyright 06-08-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Canada geese aflight--
constant chatter in the ranks--
ever-shifting bearing south


a dusting of snow
on leaves, roots and ridges,
a nip in the air


deer by the Parkway--
one dead, six more stand living;
rubberneckers stare


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08-09-2007 Denise Fairgrieve    

Like stated before, its a good thing you put irregular.

However to get to the piece, this was very thought out. Description is very vivid. You did a great job on conveying what you were trying to say.

Keep up the good work.
06-08-2007 Frank Fields    

If the disclaimer wasn't present that this was "irregular," I would have been troubled somewhat by the presentation. However, as irregular Haiku, in terms of form, but following the traditional expectations of Haiku, this trio is quite well-presented and very carefully developed for the images which are present to show themselves. And for the final "message" to be clearly envisioned by a careful reader.
Another skillful presentation by a master of his art and pen!
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