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This is a haiku if Mike hasn't realized it. But I agree that maybe something is missing. It's a wonderful theme, but I think it comes across more as a nice statement, rather than a real poem, especially the kind one expects from haiku.
Alright, after a couple more looks, I think I know what I see in this: a verse that would work beautifully branded on an accompanying image. My suggestion would be to maybe find an artist who wants to collaborate on an easter piece. These words would be great on a mural; by themselves they seem like a part of something bigger.