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 12-09-2007 Frank Fields
You seem to have captured the admiration and praise from some of the finest writers on PnP. All one need do is read your works and the understanding comes. I'm not familiar with that particular anime, but the poem is outstanding. Again, another offering so well done, so well dressed in a poet's clothes, that I can, again, say only, Thank you. ^^
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11-17-2007 Walter Jones
emotion explodes to the page, writer captures the audience and holds them, image takes the mind allowing a feel of story teller, a visit
of another place and in side a thought, gifted write.. Walt
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05-07-2007 Leigh G.
*nods approvingly* My only suggestion is at the very end if it still applies add the, "She has wings but she cannot fly." Superior choice of words and structure. We all base poems of animes, or books, or even video games sometimes. :) If they're emotional video games like FFX then I can see why... Anyway, randomizing a little! The ending didn't seem to fully relate to the beginning, because you don't really expect something like that to be mixed in, but I reread the poem and it made more sense. Probably would make perfect sense if I read the anime's description on Wikipedia. :) Another great anime, RahXephon. Anyway! You have a few lines that I'd like to see caps, but you have it set up where you could easily get away without them. Great work! Keep it coming!
Leigh of the Commenting Community
P.S.One of my first hit poems, "Why?" was based off my fan fiction for an anime...XD
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12-24-2006 Richard Reed Jr
A very moving and emotional poem.
Very well written.
I think sometimes we all have wings, but cannot fly.
Thanks for this poem.
~H A P P Y H O L I D A Y S~
Rich
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12-22-2006 Euna P.
Wow... this is an extremely sad poem. I feel so sorry for that girl who has wings but can't fly. It must be terrible to have to live with something like that.
The emotion was expressed very clearly, and I really liked the format of the poem. No complaints.
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12-19-2006 Jane L.
Umm.. this poem is about a anime called air tv. its a really sad anime.
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