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Anything in Store
by
Alma H.
(Age: 15)
copyright 12-19-2006
Age Rating: 4 to 127
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**For "How Come (Dear Moon)" fans, think of this as a (brighter) sequel. Thanks. Talk to you later.**
I sit and wait,
For my questions,
Will they ever get answered?
Why are roses red,
How do they love,
More never to be answered.
I wait for anything in store,
If good or bad,
I waste the day thinking.
When will things change,
What will we think of next,
I try to put these into text.
How do others live,
Who makes the choices,
There's a never ending list.
I try to change,
For anything in store,
Never a dull moment.
What makes you mean,
Why are there reasons,
Is there ever a point?
Why are there moons,
When did I think,
The never ending book.
There's always something,
anything in store,
That never has an answer.
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12-28-2007 Richard Reed Jr
Great poem,
to me life is the great mystery and though I know I will never find an answer, it's fun and exciting to try. And where would we all be if we never asked why. The surprises in life always turn me on.
I like the way you write. -technically good, variable styles, good expression, and depth.
Keep up the good work,
~Rich
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09-03-2007 Emily Garwood
I like this poem alot like people say theres alot of truth to this...so many questions and never an answer well almost always never right?¿ But the weirdest thing of all is that even though we want an answer life still carries on...unless you become obsessed trying to get an answer...ANYWAYS good write keep it up
Emy
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03-30-2007 Samantha P.
Hey Alma This is a very true poem indeed. You think maybe there will be answers but there never is. I have a poem in my notebook like this but personally I think this one is better than mine. I didn't see any errors but of course Leigh has been here before me so even if there where errors she would have beaten me at telling you anyway. The world has endless questions that are not answers, especially on how we came to exist, even with the theory of eveloution. Well Keep up the excellent work.
Samantha
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01-17-2007 Leigh G.
I really like this piece! It kinda reminds me about my ramblings in the end of the story I submitted "2006". I can really relate to this, since I've felt this way countless times. Like I said, I love the topic of this piece and I'm honored to be the first comment! Although, as the 41st hit I should be the 41st comment! But alas, not all think like a Commenting Crusader! Anyway, I couldn't find any typos or things to complain about in this one...what a pleasant change! Check out my new contest please, "When I Was Forced To Stand On The Edge Of A Cliff" and "Sanctuary"! Great work, keep writing!
Your friend,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
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