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Lost Tears, a Sailor Moon Story
Sailor Galaxia Returns
by Raycel M. (Age: 13)
copyright 12-23-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Lost Tears, a Sailor Moon Story
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"What?!" demanded Sailor Saturn, "that's immpossible!"
"That's what was in my dream, Saturn." said Small Lady, "and if somebody hadn't pinched me, I might've never gotten out of that mess."
"...pinch you?" Venus said after a while, "we didn't pinch you..."
"Then who pinched me?" Small Lady asked.
"Who knows..." Mina wondered, "maybe a ghost? Or maybe it's you're own conciousness."
Small Lady shrugged. "I don't know much about dreams, so I'll just go with that, Venus."
~*~
Small Lady wrote down her dream in her journal, it it she wrote: 'Galaxia said that I wouldn't wake up from the dream, but after I screamed PINCH ME, it felt like somthing did pinch me, and then I woke up--'
"Small Lady," said a voice, she swivled around in her chair to see her father, King Endymion, "someone's here to see you."
King Endymion moved into the room, and following him was Helios in his human form!
"Helios!" Small Lady cried, throwing herself into his arms, "where were you? I was so afraid that you died!"
"But I'm fine now," Helios murrmured into her hair, "and you're safe with me, but I have to tell you something."
Small Lady lifted her head to see that Helios' kind face had turned serious. "Sailor Galaxia has returned, so you need to be very careful on where you go..."
Small Lady looked away, "I had a dream that she had returned last night, and she almost got my star seed in my sleep...if something hadn't pinched me..."
"Do you know who?" King Endymion asked her, Small Lady looked up at him, "No."
"A little bit creepy, no?" Helios muttered to himself, but he was cut off when he heard a shattering window, then a scream...who belonged to:
"NEO QUEEN SERENITY!" Helios and Endymion cried, Small Lady picked up her dress and ran down the stairs.
"Princess!" Helios cried after her, "wait!" but Small Lady wasn't listening to him, she was worried about her mother. Small Lady ran into the grand ball room.
"SILENCE WALL!" screamed Saturn, holding out her glaive, a few golden disc's bounced off.
"VENUS LOVE AND BEAUTY SHOCK!" Venus cried, throwing what looked like a long heart shaped charm braclet, Small Lady looked to see where Venus was aiming at...and saw Sailor Galaxia.
Sailor Galaxia laughed as the chain bounced off. "You can't beat me! Foolish."
"We will to protect the princess!" cried Mars, "Mars Flaime Sniper!"
Galaxia laughed again and held out her hand and grabbed the flame arrow.
"No way!" Mars screamed, Galaxia held out her hand and summoned up more golden disc's, Saturn couldn't get the sheild up fast enough, and Mars was hit.
"SAILOR MARS!" screamed Neo Queen Serenity, Mars screamd as he star seed floated into Galaxia's hands. Galaxia cackled.
"YOU WITCH!" screamed King Endymion, who had ran into the room and was rocketing toward Sailor Galaxia.
"DAD!"
"ENDYMION!"
Galaxia had a wicked gleam in her eye, but before she could get King Endymion's star seed, something that looked like fire hit Galaxia, knocking her out. Endymion skidded to a halt.
"What was that?!" demanded Helios, stopping beside Small Lady, Sailor Jupiter gasped and pointed at the open celeing, where the fire had come from...a silhoette was flying in mid air.
"Is it...?" Small Lady thought, "no...it can't be!"
The thing roared and flew off.


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06-18-2007 Alma H.    

This is getting interesting. Again, if you re-read your chapters, there would be a lot of correcting. A big one I noticed was when Mars got her star seed taken. She is a she, not a he. You'll see it. Also at the beginning, it said Venus, but then Mina. I think you wanted to stay with the Venus name. Other than that, I like it. Keep it up. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.


04-27-2007 Mehrina B.    

You copyin' my zut, Leigh? :p

I'm enthusiastic about your story idea! I agree, I like the Rini-Helios couple; maybe I'm just a romantic, but their story always sounded striking to me.

Who or what was that little shadow? Someone from the Amazon Trio? Hmm.... fire.... I have no idea! I'll have to read the next chapter then, eh?

I'm applaud your writing skills. Although your chapters are somewhat on the short side, they have depth! You don't keep saying she said, he said. You use a lot of creative language, and that's something every book needs to have! Bravo!

Her Wisdom
~*Athena*~
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04-26-2007 Leigh G.    

Zut! Sorry, I forgot praise...early senility, I warn all about it on my author page... Hope you don't mind the second comment, personally I think it looks messy so hence my apology...


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04-26-2007 Leigh G.    

I always like the idea of Chibi-Usa and Helios as a couple. :) I could be wrong, but I think I read once on Behind the Name.com, the best site to find out the meanings of names there ever was and ever will be in my opinion, said that Helios meant sun, if my memory serves me. Awww, it's so short! Size-wise, reminds me of the horror that was my first book Oblivion...I suggest you don't read it, it's terriable...-.- Oh, I suggest you use HTML over caps, using capital letters is very unprofessional...you can go under Samantha H's book Tips & Tricks to the HTML guide to get the codes, if you don't already know them. Good work, I'm off to the next chapter!


Leigh of the Commenting Community


P.S. Thanks for the comment on the prologue to Past Alive! If you didn't read my little note, that book is a year old. Check out Flights of Fantasy if you want to know what I've been doing recently. :)


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