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Lost Tears, a Sailor Moon Story
End of all Hope
by Raycel M. (Age: 13)
copyright 12-23-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Lost Tears, a Sailor Moon Story
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"HELIOOOOOS!!!" Small Lady screamed as he fell to the ground, his star seed floating to Sailor Galaxia's hands, she cackled. "Helios' star seed will be just fine, after all, it doesn't matter which star see I get, it matters if I just get a star seed. HAHAHAHA!! So long, kitties, HAHAHA--!" The laughing faded away as Galaxia dissapeared.
Firestar dropped to the ground. "I had my chance..." she muttered, "I had my chance, she was in my hands!" Firestar dug her claws into the ground, "instead, I let her go and take a star seed with her!" Firestar roared and let go a string of fire. "SHE. WILL NOT. GET AWAY!!"
Small Lady held the dead Helios in her arms and cried. "Helios, Helios, Helios...no...no NO NO!"
"Small Lady..." Helios said weakly.
Small Lady looked into Helios' eyes, they were growing more dimmer. "Yes? I'm here, what is it?"
"I'm sorry I am making you suffer..." Helios put his hand on Small Lady's face and leaned forward. Small Lady closed her eyes and Helios pressed his lips to her's.
"I love you...Maiden..." Helios whispered, then he passed away.
"Helios? Helios? HELIOS! NOOOOOOO!" Small Lady screamed to the sky, then she held Helios' lifeless body close to her's. "I love you too..." Small lady broke off, sobbing.
Firestar gazed at the mourning Small Lady. Firestar had never been so moved. "I have finally understood what love is." Firstar thought, coiling her body around Small Lady, concealing her from the world.
"It's my fault." Firestar whispered to Small Lady, "I should've killed Galaxia while I had the chance."
Small Lady's sobbs turned to tiny wimpers. "No, it's not you're fault." Small Lady said to Firestar, "in Galaxia's final attempt, she would've tried to get my star seed any way, and Helios still might've died."
Firestar gazed away from Small Lady and stared down at Crystal Tokyo, her eyes widened.
"I'm glad that Helios didn't have to see this, though..." Firstar said, unwrapping Small Lady.
Small Lady could only think of the worse as she ran to the edge of the mountain...Crystal Tokyo lay in ruins. "Oh...no..."
Firestar stood next to Small Lady, "is this the end of all hope?"


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06-22-2007 Alma H.    

This is getting really interesting. So you die when you lose a star seed. I thought they just passed out, because they wake back up when they get their star seed back. Anyway, there were a few places that had misspellings, but nothing big. I'm on to the next chapter. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.


04-26-2007 Leigh G.    

Arg, I forgot my signature on my last comment! Forgive my endless ramblings, I'm painfully random right now. Very short, not much happened, but still a good chapter. Quick-paced, interesting, even though it reminds me of my older work killing people off in a few chapters...XD My only grammar pick is the over use of capitals and double punctuation everywhere, and my only story-related pick is that it's a little hard to get into since it's so short. I'd be off to the next chapter but I must vacuum my floor then take a math test! I know that sounds super weird but---hey, you're home schooled too! I forgot! So it probably doesn't sound weird at all since I'm supposed to be doing my on line health class! I'll read the rest of your book tonight, or tomorrow! Good work, keep writing!


Your fellow homeschooler,
Leigh of the Commenting Community


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