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Out of the Cage
by
Jane L.
(Age: 14)
copyright 12-30-2006
Age Rating: 10 to 127
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The spirit of the wind shakes the window,
And the bird in the cage starts it's song.
Sing my bird, sing my bird.
Sing your lovely song,
Sing.
The cold wind rushes in with the dust.
The wind carries such sad stories.
Sing my bird, sing.
Sing your lovely song.
Sing the song of your story.
Pour out those cramped emotions.
You captivate me with those eyes.
Each filled with a little tear,
Each filled with so much emotion,
I can't take it all in.
Sing my bird, sing.
Fly out of the cage.
Fly above the white clouds.
The angels in the sky listen to your song
and harmonize with you.
Sing and sing.
Fly and fly.
Away from this horror,
Away from this sadness.
Away...
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05-07-2007 Leigh G.
You might like my story, "Fly". It's theme is how brids are locked in cages, when they're the only beings with wings that are giving the rite of flight. Well, insects have wings too but they're creepy as hell and I'd rather not go into that technicality on the wings thing. -.- Anyway! I enjoyed this poem, even though I though it was a little on the repetitive side. Yes, I know you did it on purpose but, personally, I found there to be a little too much repetition. Anyway, this had a solid idea and you got your point across. Seems like we all write a poem or story with the themes of wings and flying away, huh? I have a poem Black Wings...zut, reflecting on all these old stories and poems is making me feel old again. I did finally hit 100 poems. :D XD I turn 13 in June though. :D 13+ things shall finally be unlocked to me on PnP...I've been watching PG-13 and R rated movies for over two years, Teen rated video games since I was eight, and probably teen rated books since I was eight. 16+ books in the last year...XD Arg, randomizing! Good work Jane! Keep writing!
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03-02-2007 Walter Jones
Your words dance and feel, a hard task to accomplish,the juvenile in the poem adds to its color, it captured my mind nicely done.. Walt
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02-14-2007 Misty Montier
the quality of this poem is fantastic...I am blown away by the talent you possess at such a young age...please keep it up
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02-01-2007 Euna P.
This is such an awesome poem! The emotion is very clearly portrayed and I can relate from personal experience to this poem. It's very good. It reminds me of a poem that I wrote about one being portrayed as a bird stuck in a cage and longing for the sky. It's called "I Can Fly..." ^__^
Sorry for the formal language (formal-ish). I just took the SATs and so my head is spinning with wierd stuffs.
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01-02-2007 Chessie H.
I really like your poem. The bird comes to life with your words. I can feel the melancholy atmosphere and tone throughout every verse. The end is full of sad freedom, like leaving a best friend caught in a trap behind. Excellent work.
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