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The Eternal Sleep
by Chessie Hodge (Age: 18)
copyright 01-09-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Cold sickly sweet rain,
The glass window,
The shattering ceiling,
Fall,
Haunt my dreams,
Black ink dripping,
Hands slipping,
Seeping walls,
Lost in drowning,
Looking at the cracks,
"Ashes,"
Shards,
Roses growing in red pools of sorrow,
Washing away,
"to ashes..."
Numb,
Rain turns to snow,
"Dust,"
Black flowers blossom,
Silence,
Sleeping forest,
Lonely gypsy song echoing softly,
"to dust..."
White,
Dancing stars,
Faceless deer,
Naked trees,
Stark,
Picturesque Lady Luna,
Ribbons of light,
Icy claws reaching out,
Delicate,
Night eternal,
Thorns encasing bare stone,
A violin requiem,
Dead...


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03-16-2007 Jane L.    

Beautiful poem. And good choice of words. ^^
01-31-2007 Daniel Hedgecorth    

This was an excellent poem. It was beautiful to
01-30-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

Beautiful choice of phrases. This was like a Monet painting with words. I'm really amazed at your talent.
I enjoyed this thoroughly.

Keep up the good work,

Rich
01-18-2007 Alma H.    

Indeed, another deep poem. It just flows, I swore it. I liked the way you put the line of "Ring around the Rosy" At first, you were gonna right, 'we all fall down' at the end. But instead you wrote 'Dead' close enough. I think its better you wrote that. The way you detail all of these things, like the rain and the roses, wow. Well, you're 16 so that might help. I guess I don't have to say keep it up anymore because you really good. So is Leigh, but hey. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
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