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Hmmm, very interesting! Personally, I don't believe there's perfection in anything or anybody. Nothing can be perfect in the eyes of all, there is always somebody to doubt something. Especially with coupes...I find it impossible for perfection to exist in love. Opinions and feelings always add complexities to things, too. Over all, although this poem is a little odd and had a bumpy flow I liked the idea. Your choice of words kinda makes the flow odd, but you did a pretty good job with this piece. Good work, keep writing!
I'm not yet sure how to rate this, but it's certainly direct. Also, in the last stanza, I think "their" should probably be "they're." I'm going to hold off on giving stars for the moment. Maybe you can work on it some more. Try to "show, don't tell."
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