For all that it is worth
by
Jack Curson
(Age: 32)
copyright 01-30-2007
Age Rating: 10 to 127
For all that it is worth,
Love is a conqueror…
Deep within, forced upon my sensitive soul,
You have set me free from the desolateness of the world’s heart.
Wandering, I am lost struggling across barren lands.
Built on the predication of character,
Will hopelessness define me?
This man made of steel is a front, a masquerade,
Buried; a game played with my own fluttering heart,
Hiding from you, the truth of the man inside…
Oh, what pain drives this?
Could love be released if I chose to let go of the strings being played upon my heart?
What happiness would I have without the breaking dawn of your smile?
Was not Jesus man bound with endless love?
Barren was his body for the ultimate sacrifice to us all.
Wasted, I digress…
The thoughts of lying upon a cold wet floor, flooded,
These tears are overwhelming.
For all that it is worth,
Love is a conqueror…
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At first I thought, Another syrupy teenage love poem. On second reading I began to pick up on the nuances which lift it beyond. The writing is sound, simple and to the point. You did not try to flaunt your vocabulary as some do. Maybe not my favorite poem in the whole wide world but I liked it. Good show!
Another good poem i have red so far of this website I every one on this website produces great standard work (I am positive person so that makes my comments always look on the bright side) apart from that this sounds really good have you got more of these kinds of poems if you do I want to know the honestly. "Deep within, forced upon my sensitive soul" is my favorite line it fell so emotion full. I also love the rest but as I said this line was my favorite out of all. It's Fabulous, Fantastic, and Excellent...
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