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05-30-2008
Frank Fields
Whenever a write can evoke as many sentiments as have been expressed, and those which I find within myself, as a result of reading this, it can only be because the author has opened up some doors or allowed through his skill and talent, to allow others to open those doors, it is the measure of a write well-done. I would rather leave my own discoveries within my own closet, with this write, for it touches on some rather poignant moments of my own that I'm too selfish to share with anyone. At least right now. Later....who knows? It may well be that this write might serve as an open door to a hallway down which there are ample treasures to share with everyone.
Thank you for this one, also. ^^
Frank :)
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09-07-2007
Tammy Frascona
Awww, this is so sad and beautiful, love lost and remembered with all the sadness one feels when the love of their live has passed. I believe this poem to be true to live for you, is it? If so I have so much apathy and respect for a love so unique and missed!
Tammy F.****
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02-15-2007
Misty Montier
...sorry, I have to disagree with Wayne a bit on this...I didn't find your poem melancholoy at all...more like wistful, nostalgic, a celebration of and thanksgiving for love...the use of metaphors are just terrific here...nice read...
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02-09-2007
Wayne Thomas
Excellent read. Nice form. Seemed rather melancholy, yet with an undertone of hope.
Good stuff.
Wayne
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02-05-2007
Mehrina Butt
A deep poem, dedicated to the one who keeps life worth living.
Well done, Rich!
As always, your word choice is fantastic! The ways you expressed how whenever you feel horrible, there's always one way to go to feel better. I especially liked the third stanza; the last line was phenomenal. Just like every other, in truth!
Nice write!
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