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First Christmas (Dr. Quinn poem)
by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18)
copyright 02-05-2007


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First Christmas away from home,
First Christmas at my new home.
Children’s first Christmas without their ma,
Children’s first Christmas with their new ma.

We have a feast, a humble, Christmas feast
That we will eat this Christmas Eve
And as we sit and pray for peace
And pause for a plenty second,

I wonder who will cut this bird,
This bird that sits on our table.
A bird that once flew in the Colorado air
And echoed its replies in the valleys

I hear a noise, a rumbling near the porch.
At first I stir, and stand at once and
Unbar the door, to lend out a hand
To welcome our turkey carver.

Based upon the Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman series


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03-06-2007 Sam Hackel-Butt    

Dr. Quinnnnnnn. Yay :)

Alright the repetition at the beginning bugged me a little, as it didn't seem too original, but like you ran out of rhyming ideas. I know you can rhyme, girl! Use the rhyme dictionary, or Jane (the rhymer) and I'm sure you can find something that will fit perfectly in the context of Dr. Quinn. Maybe add another stanza as to not miss out on anything that removing the repetition might... well, remove. Good job, though.

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